Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 2
The feedback I had received from the last Elevator Pitch really improved my thought process going forward. This time I remembered to address some key issues that I didn't mention in my last elevator pitch. For example, in this pitch, I think most investors would be more than willing to agree that self expression and individuality are the guiding forces behind this current generation's values. This insight on the current generation's knack for individuality will create the opening needed for the investors to invest in my product. I definitely appreciate all the comments I received from the last pitch because they shaped how I will market my product.
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Hi, I like how you present your idea. I feel like dressing nicely will also make a good impression on investors. Your professionalism will certainly aid in making your idea more appealing to the market. Furthermore, I am glad to hear that you learned from your first pitch and that you feel you have significantly improved. Feel free to check out my blog and video as well:
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Ben
Hi Rnard, I believe this idea would be very helpful with catering to customers in the drive thru lines as the customer would be able to easily customize their orders. I agree with you as consumers always want more options. The implementation of QuickPay allows for customers to quickly order on their own and avoid lines and other hassles.
ReplyDeleteHere's the link to my second elevator pitch if you'd like to check it out:
http://gregneatrours.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Rnard! I like the concept of your idea trying to save people time and money, but I think people can agree that the fastest method of ever getting food and saving money is going to a fast food place. Like Greg said, I think this might me better for restaurants, maybe while you are waiting for a table, or even at grocery stores. Kind of like Cartwheel for Target (if you don't know, google it). Other than that, your outfit was very professional and I really enjoyed reading about your project. You should check out my blog. Here it is: http://kmglickman.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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ReplyDeleteI love the business idea. I agree that everyone is looking for products that are individualized to them. I think this app could help with reducing the number of mistakes on orders as well! That might be something you could mention in your next pitch. I loved your professionalism and demeanor, the only thing I could suggest for the actual pitch is using more body language. You could try talking with your hands more, but only if it is comfortable. Overall, amazing job!
Here's the link to my own post: http://ckm-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html