Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch 3
This time I decided to be more relaxed and just go with the flow. I incorporated all of the feedback I was given by explaining more clearly what my product does and how it addresses the consumers' needs. The feedback was generally recommending that I make sure that I'm marketing my product in a effective way that captures the investors' attention. I decided to use my hands to convey my message just a little bit more to feel relaxed.
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Hello Renard, I enjoy watching your Elevator Pitch3. I think your pitch sounds clearly and smoothly and I like your idea about quick pay. This product will definitely reduce the time for waiting the line to order food. If you can, for next time, I suggest you to talk more about quick pay like which restaurants can you use, how to obtain this product or so on.
ReplyDeleteGood work. I am planning to open the fast sushi restaurant.
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Rnard,
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I would encourage you to try and enunciate your words even more when you speak, make eye contact with the camera, and smile more when you speak. A smile and energy communicate passion and belief in what you are trying to create. I like your idea, but in order to sell it in an elevator pitch, you need to be able to be excited about it. Overall, I like that you are standing and what you said about your product.
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